We must include:
Connectors
Simple Past, Continous and Present Perfect
Descriptive adjectives
While the parents were sitting in their kitchen, crying, someone knocked on the door. And there he was the boy that was so happy, with tears in his eyes. Mike run to hug his parents that were as shock as delightful. After half an hour of hugs and tears, they finally asked what had happened to him. Mike, nervous and afraid retold the story. He told that he was walking in the neighbour hood and he saw a hurt cat in the street. While he was taking care of the cat, a black car stopped right next to him. Some men got out of the car and kept him in an antique garage, The men barely gave Mike to eat. One day, he shouted so hard, that a man passing there, call the police.
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