-5 connectors
-4 examples of direct speech
-3 similes
-1 metaphor
-2 examples of past perfect
LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAP
I´m really tired of feeling like this. I´m tired of feeling that when I gIve someone a hand, they take my elbow. I have feelings, my heart breaks a little more everytime. I hear how people mistreat me. Neither my family nor my closest friends know what is happening to me. People in my school go past me like I am nothing, and I have been invisible since I can remember. I feel as a sad girl without a way out.
"I can´t handle this anymore. I feel so destroyed"- I whispered to my only friend, the one that is as nice and quite, like the dark sky. Besides, she is the only one who had always been there,
"Please, look before you leap, you are so young, don´t make something stupid"- she exclaimed with a desperate look.
"I... I can´t"- I was almost without voice. However, her look made me have hope in that something good could happen to me. Instead, I realised that I was fat and ugly, that no guy could ever look at me. As a result, I will be lonely my whole life.
"Look, you are the best person in the whole world, and people are too blind to see that"- her voice, as soft as silk, made me cry, and she ran to me and I hugged her like tomorrow didn´t exist.
At the end, I realised, how important was to think things better, and to have a person that is there no matter what.
You need to think what you are doing befor doing it.
